在雅想写稿中开yun体育网，一切的写稿手段齐不如对写稿的细节把捏。在深广的写稿训练中，考生不错笔据雅想写稿评分范例来琢磨我方的写稿水平。

一.终止毋庸的单词和词组

1.一些不必要的单词或词组根柢弗成为句子带来任何相干的或重要的信息，十足不错被删掉。比如：When all things are considered， young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents， in my opinion。

这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“齐显得过剩。十足不错去掉。改为：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。

2.替换没趣的抒发，挑升写出复杂的长难句，可是让通盘句子显得稀薄冗长，其实并不会给你的雅想作文加分。

举例：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。

“due to the fact that”即是一个很典型的繁琐的抒发神色的例子，不错替换，简化为底下的抒发神色：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have now.

二.终止类似词汇和抒发

1.雅想写稿评分范例中有小数：丰富性。好多考生作念不到在写稿中使用更丰富的词汇和抒发，也就与高分交臂失之。有的时期天然词汇莫得类似，但真谛却有类似。这时期不错作念一些简化的责任。

举例底下这个例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size。

large对一个farm来说即是size方面的large，是以in size不错去掉，改为：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large。更精真金不怕火的抒发神色为：My grandfather grew up on a large farm。2.无意一个词组不错用一个更毛糙的单词来替换

举例：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents＇ farm。

这里的over and over again就不错改为repeatedly，显得更为精真金不怕火：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents＇ farm.

雅想写稿备考误区

1.背大学四六级词汇就能告成通过雅想写稿磨练额外多量量的同学外传只好花时辰把大学四六级的单词全部背熟就能插足雅想写稿磨练。

其实，大学四六级英语磨练和雅想磨练十足是2种不同的英文测试系统，两者莫得内在相干，应试法子也大相径庭。

是以同学们花大元气心灵在背诵和细腻大学四六级词汇无疑是花费时辰和芳华的一种举止。

针对这一误区，提出考生多阅读海外学术类讲明，积攒词汇和习用句型，或者看剑桥雅想系列真题集4-10，内部的阅读著作包括附录中考官给出的高分范文中的词汇齐是雅想写稿磨练的重要词汇。

此外，无意辰的同学不错插足专科和系统的雅想考前培训，在较短的时辰内，安分会教育你们怎样正确科学并高效地准备雅想磨练。

2.裸考雅想，以考代替温习

尽管雅想磨练并不像高考那样一考定终身，每年有40多场雅想磨练不错插足。可是毫无准备的去插足磨练自身是一种不安适和对我方不崇敬，对父母血汗钱的一种亵渎。

因此提出同学们必须历程系统培训或者自学后，有一定的准备和把捏了再去插足磨练，以期告成通过。

3.反复作念剑桥真题系列，就能获得写稿高分

剑桥真题系列是一套相当经典和泰斗的雅想应试贵府，不错这样说，扫数准备插足雅想磨练的考生基本东谈主手齐有一套剑桥的讲义。

正确的作念法是要仔细阅读剑桥附录中考官所写的范文，商酌其段落布局，词汇句型，培养想路和语感。

雅想作文写稿例题

大作文题目：Some people think that the detailed description of crimes on newspapers and TV has bad consequences， so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

话题分类：媒体类

1.题目瓦解：

题目大意：一些东谈主以为报纸和电视上对于违警举止的细节刻画有负面的影响，因此这样的信息在媒体中应该被截止。在何种进度上应允这个不雅点？

题型特色：需明确标明对不雅点的作风；同期，题目中有一部分信息是不雅点的原因，‘对违警举止的细节刻画有负面影响’，对这部分信息弗成忽略了回复，不错跟主体段解说应该被截止放在一谈回复。

本文论文鼓励：开头引出当下对于媒体的争议，以及题目中的不雅点，标明我方态度。中间段先分析为何此类信息需要被截止，接着用铩羽的神色承认一些媒体上此类信息有一定克己，但过于细节的是需要截止的。驱逐总论断点，重申不雅点。

难点：这谈题容易让考生纠结截止的‘进度’问题，提出同学们针对题目给出的枢纽信息‘detailed description’进行回复，即咱们的不雅点是‘截止媒体上对于违警细节的刻画’，而不是十足不合违警信息进行报谈。

2.写稿想路：

开头段：当下媒体开脱度较高，对违警的报谈也越来越丰富。有东谈主惦记此类细节的报谈会产生不良效劳，应该被截止。个东谈主不雅点示意应允。

主体第一段：之是以应该截止这一类细节刻画，有几大原因。受到最大影响的是违警的受害者，报谈过于细节，会加剧他们的身心创伤，致使侵略狡饰。而对鄙俚专家来说也有害，细节刻画含有过于血腥暴力的试验，不仅引起不适，也让东谈主担忧对年青东谈主的影响。三是对于一些潜在的违警份子，这些细节报谈可能会给他们提供信息复旧，刺激和怂恿了违警举止。

主体第二段：天然，范围的报谈有正向作用，也有东谈主以为在报纸和电视上对违警进行一定进度的报谈卤莽让专家增强安全意志，了解违警份子的举止样式，改善保护措施，幸免成为受害者。但报谈的试验应当进行充分审查，进行枢纽的阐述即可，细节的报谈是莫得必要的。

驱逐段：总的来说，基于对环球和违警率的影响，违警的细节刻画是需要受到审查和截止的， 天然报纸和电视有协助专家晋升属目意志的包袱。

参考范文

Increased degree of freedom in media reports has allowed exposure of crime cases to come forth in a detailed manner， which certainly arouses a great deal of concern. In light of this， some people believe there should be restrictions on such information. From my perspective， I agree that censorship should be imposed on the descriptions of crime.

There are several reasons why the focus of newspapers and television on high-profile crimes should be more carefully regulated. The group most affected by the news media＇s coverage of violence and victimization is crime victims. This is because media coverage that is sometimes viewed as insensitive， voyeuristic， and uncaring can largely violate victims’ privacy and inflict their emotional and psychological suffering. Not only that，the general public seldom benefits from this exposure to crime details. In fact， these descriptions can not only cause discomfort but also arouse apprehension about the impacts on young people. Besides，it is likely that potential offenders would be instigated and incited to commit crimes， since they might regard detailed media coverage as a form of guidance.

It is undeniable that the coverage of crime cases can be helpful and，in some cases，even healing. Some would also suggest that the media have the obligation to keep the public well informed about trends in crime. Indeed，the media play a significant role in public safety by keeping citizens apprised of essential information on criminal affairs，such as new patterns of fraud，ways to assist victims and measures to prevent crime. However，the extent to which the media can cover about these cases should be censored carefully by avoiding excessively detailed descriptions，so that they can accurately cover crime stories with the least amount of trauma to the victim and negative repercussions on the public.

In conclusion， although newspapers and television need to raise the public awareness of key information on crime cases开yun体育网， I contend that restrictions should be imposed on excessive descriptions of details， in order to mitigate the detrimental consequences.